Can you leave it all behind; cause you can't go back.... Hole my will, hole my strength, rip it out, start again.

Well, Hadri has finally come to life in my mind as a whole person. I knew his morals, likes, dislikes, past, goals, hell, I even knew what his favorite ice cream flavor was. The thing that has cemented him as a 'real' person was finding his song.
The song that reaches out and discribes him, to a T.
Caine's song is Limp Bizkit's My Way. It describes what he will do to get what he wants, it describes his thoughts, it describes the aura and the feeling of 'being caine'.
Hadri's song is Offspring's Defy You.
"You may push me around, but you can not win; you may throw me down, but I'll rise again. The more you say, the more I defy you, so get out of my face... you cannot stop us, you cannot bring us down, Never give up we go on and on... you'll never break us, never bring us down; we are alive.
My anger grows, I'll use it to win...."

When finding a character's song, it has to be something released to the general public, written by someone other than you. If you can do this, you can make real characters.

So I have edited all the way through Chapter five so far. I'm going to read through chapter five again and see if anything needs changing, but as far as that goes, the first Iteration is done with. Theres two or three things i need to think on before i set it on the figurative shelf, but as of now, i can, with a clear conscience, finish reading the fifth chapter and work on the sixth, where the new part starts.
Hardcore milestone there.